• Begin your essay early, so there is time for reflection before choosing a topic, creating an outline, writing the essay, reconstructing the essay once or twice if necessary, and editing it thoroughly.

  • You will have the opportunity to list your achievements on the Common App or on a resume.

  • Relaying anecdotal information is one of the best ways to “show rather than tell”.

  • Even if writing about a misfortune, stay upbeat, focusing on what you learned or how it has changed you or your worldview.

  • Strong verbs punctuate your message while also creating a picturesque visual. An example of passive voice is: “The ball was thrown by John.” College admissions officers would rather read: “John threw the ball.”

  • Examples of a cliche are “too many cooks in the kitchen” and “nerves of steel”. College admissions teams want to read your original thoughts.

  • This is where anecdotal information is important. For instance, avoid writing that you, for instance, have a strong work ethic. Share a story that shows that you do.

  • If you have a quirky personality, be quirky. Be who you are.

  • Paint a picture with your words to give readers a vibrant visual.

“Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.”

― Anton Chekhov